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Interesting magic. I'm looking forward to seeing more, this feels like foreshadowing

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Thank you. Well, it's a rare - and often - dangerous magic that tampers with the mind.

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Magical backlash???? Oooh, that's a cool twist. Can't wait to read more!!!

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Yep! Magical backlash! 😁

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Mind magic and potential magical backlashes. The tension's mounting!

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Oh yeah, just when the hero might be thinking "Oh, this can't get any worse" !!

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As one writing expert once said, "The job of a good writer is to get your character up a tree, then throw rocks at him.”

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Good thing I've got a whole lot of rocks! 😂

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