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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I kinda like Tela off the leash. :) Good thing Kiyosi is patient and kind.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Kiyosi is an absolute saint sometimes. A bit paranoid maybe, but really just a saint.

And oh, yeah Tela off the leash is a joy to write! 😁

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Rob Mortell's avatar

Agreed!

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Another great installment! I love the fierceness from Tela!!! And Ki is soooo loyal. 🤩

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

She really is so very upset over this! And yes, Ki is also so loyal to her. He really is "ok, so we're doing this? Yep, we're really doing this. I'll get the bandages."

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DW Dixon  ⚙️⚙️'s avatar

You have a very easy writing style. I was fully immersed the whole time. Also, your exposition is spot on.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thank you! ❤️

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Rob Mortell's avatar

I really enjoyed this chapter. Tela showed a lot of character. I could feel some frustration as she tries to find answers.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Yep, she's trying to copy with what happened to her. Tela is always one to look for answers. Kiyosi? He just sighs, packs the bandages, and runs to catch up.

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Rob Mortell's avatar

haha

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