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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

The room is the lock??? Brilliant 👏 👏 👏

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Well, if you were a thief trying to break in, would you see that coming? 😉

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

No, I only see things coming when I edit😉🤣

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

So THAT's when the room turns into a lock! Gotcha! 😉😁🤣

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Jim Melvin's avatar

This is terrific writing, active and slick with clever dialogue.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thank you! ❤️ I do my best.

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Rob Mortell's avatar

That's such a clever mechanism. Loved the team working together to figure it out, absolutely awesome!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thanks! It was a fun chapter and mechanism to work out for them to solve.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Come on, Tela! Wear your goggles! Put your thinking cap on! And lock yourself in--we have a puzzle to solve!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

She really has this love-hate relationship with her goggles. 🤣

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