July 20, 1722. Ruins of the Silvashar Library of Lësarilis. Deep in a swamp on San Andrés Island, off the contested eastern coast of New Spain in the Caribbean Sea.
I absolutely love the start of this story. It has everything ... magic, creatures, book-crab-creatures, and explosive villians! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I absolutely love the start of this story. It has everything ... magic, creatures, book-crab-creatures, and explosive villians! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I really like how you made a whole new narrator voice for this. Well done!
Thanks! I was really hoping this narrator voice would stand out from the other one.
This one comes across as a bit more snarky and self confident. He adds a more humorous touch to things.
Yeah, I really like to lean into how a character's backstory, and their environment, shape their culture, and really their view.
Nicely done.
You’re doing great! Keep it going! 👍🔥
Thanks! ❤️
Great beginning to a bold new tale of adventure, intrigue, and otherworldly horror.
Thesaurus crabs behind, wicked captains in front! I already hooked! Great beginning!