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DW Dixon  ⚙️⚙️'s avatar

I liked Captain Storm. I'm a sucker for a civilized villain.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Yeah, in my first draft he was more of a thug which was ... pretty boring. When I made him that level of "bloody, dirty civilized villain" I was like "oh yeah, that's him, right there"

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Another thrilling chapter that nicely pits hero against villian. 🫡 Until next time, Captain Storm and your freaky amulet.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

But did the villain perish at the claws of the monsters??? Dead men tell no tales!!!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ooh. Nice of him to give the pirate captain a cutlass. That debt might get repaid later!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Might! But you never know, it could be "no good deed goes unpunished!"

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ooh, there’s a thought.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Whew! That was a close one!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Absolutely a narrow escape!

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