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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Pedro has work to do! I like the way Lysander describes the way he understands the workings of the two potions.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Lysander sometimes has a way to just lay things out in such a straightforward form! And oh yes, Pedro has his work cut out for him!

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Lysander could have been useful and brought the poor doctor some coffee!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

He could! But he has to make sure the doctor takes his medicine.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

As our mutual friend, @TELLMEAMYSTERY, would likely say, it would be better with coffee.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

It could even be said "with coffee he might be bright!" 😂😂

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Cy Gwyn's avatar

I'm new to this tale! This is my first read, and it hit me right in the feels. I don't even know who Renwick is and I'm sad he's gone.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

I so understand. The previous chapter ( https://kummerwolfe.substack.com/p/death-whispers-21-rising-secrets ) is the heart of what happened there. Both chapters were tough to write!

But, to be fair, it's been a tough road across these 22 chapters so far for the characters!

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Cy Gwyn's avatar

It is very well done! I will likely be going back to the beginning to read the whole thing!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the ride from Chapter 1 to here in Chapter 22! ❤️

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Another excellent installment!!! Glad our hero is healing and can't wait to see what happens when they land at the deadly silent port!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Oh it’s what they expect yet so much worse!

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