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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Characters: Motivated.

Readers: Primed

Popcorn: Popping.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Hopefully, there will be enough popcorn!

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Enjoyed the varied pace and setting descriptions. . . And can’t wait to see Pedro does next!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thank you! This one was actually a bit tough to write, and worried me to no end. Covering ground with a recap, then transition to something more stealthy then push to more urgency? That, at least for me, was a challenge to get the pacing right ( at least in my head! )

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Mission accomplished!

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

I'm glad Pedro, the crew & ship got some healing time but the battle ahead sounds fierce! Can't wait!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

*looks at notes and plot beats for Chapter 30, grins nervously* ... hmm... a'yep! 😁😂

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Grrr… teasing is not nice! 😂 We know something big is coming!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂Would I do that???

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