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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Fantastic opening scene, Kummer! For some reason, I really liked, "The caribou galloped with gleeful caribou abandon." It kinda encapsulated the feel of the scene.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂 Honestly, that was one of the best lines to write! I laughed so hard I cried from writing it!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

GodDAMN, Kummer! You really know how to write an action scene. I chuckled my way through this. The homage to Indy is strong in this one, and I love it!

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. It had me laughing more than once when I was polishing it.

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

And we're off!!! Wow! Tela & Ki at it again. Times are good!❤️

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Ki might need a tranquilizer though 😂

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

And can we talk about that title? Slithering Maze!!!! I'm ready for that location. Not. 😄

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂Just think how Ki will feel?!?!

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

I can see that. It's tough when the plan changes. 😆

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

True. It could also be said Ki can get a bit nervous at times, too....

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