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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Wonderful details! Ki is one of my favs, so the insight is delightful!

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Sam Liebl's avatar

the storms and how they’re described as this chaotic breaking point between reality, magic and wild magic was tight as hell. Fun to read as a German-speaker as well. 'Schutz Fields'; 'protection fields'.

We talked about this, but I wanna reiterate how much a fan I am of people bringing new species into fantasy. Elves, trolls, orcs—I'm down for it all. Fantasy is about taking these traditions, like, say a fairy, and making it about our world. At least that's what I want my fantasy to be. Maybe others want it to be something different. But I love people exploring new life forms.

Language lover here. In German "Tief" means deep ("The Ocean is deep"="Der Ozean ist tief."); combined with the diminutive "ling," would mean something small, born from depth or darkness—a perfect fit for their 'tempestuous' :) origins. My only mild thought is whether the plural could be "tieflinge" or "tieflingen." The first feels evocative of German epic tradition, like Der Nibelungenlied, which adds a layer of literary resonance. But overall, this was a fascinating dive into a species that feels both grounded and extraordinary, with so much narrative potential.

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